NAME OF EATERY-OUR school canteen
ADDRESS-SENKANG secondary school
RATING-Five
In Sengkang sec,there is a place where students and the teachers relax and enjoy their meal that is our school canteen!
Basically our school canteen is always kept clean.The students and the pupils always abide the rules.They do not liter.The cleaners also give a big helping hand in keeping the canteen clean.the canteen is always warm and inviting.The ambience of the canteen is simpliy divine.
Our canteen sells scrumptious food at affordable prices.There are some dishes that are so tasty
that your sailva oozes out from your mouth.Here are some of them.
Dish1
Mee goreng
spicy green chilli with succulent pieces of meat with tasty noodles.If you are a spicy lover ,you will confirm love it.This dish is confirm worth a try.
Dish 2
chicken rice.
Briliant rice with tender and flavorable chicken.you cannot help but to take a second helping.I
gurantee you that this dish will really impress you when you eat it.
Dish3
Roti prata
crispy roti prata with spicy fish curry.It is a tongue tingling dish.It is a very good breakfast.
Conclusion
my school canteen is a best place to eat and relax .i am proud that i have such a wonderful canteen
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You can try to describe the taste of the food further. Some spelling error like 'litter' is not 'liter'. Over all is quite good, used a lot of descriptive word and phrases. Eg. tender and flavorable.
ReplyDeletetake note of spelling mistakes .
ReplyDeletequite a number of discriptive words and phrases used .
Joyce here.
ReplyDeleteYou may want to describe more other food and the vendors services. After you're done writing, you should read a few times to check if there are any mistakes. Its good that you describe the canteen and the food taste.
Good try the descriptions were fine. Well u can also describe what other facilities dose your school canteen has and what other service dose the vendors offer.
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ReplyDeletequite good.Try to prevent grammatical errors such as 'i' and spelling mistakes such as 'liter'.overall a good effort. you can add more text to it. no more comments
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